The Bright Side of Banishment

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The prompt was “conversation.” I took it a bit further and made a short story entirely out of dialogue because dialogue is my jam.

“You know, this could be worse.”

“Oddsballs, Lawrence! We’re scheduled to be banished. Forever. How could it possibly be worse?”

“Well, I mean, we could have been killed, so….”

“Yes, being taken away from our country, never to see our friends and family again, is much better. I feel so much more optimistic now.”

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Pygmalion

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(On thirdcoastwriters.wordpress.com, our theme was to rewrite myths….I’m terribly late with my post and not completely satisfied with the end result, but here it is, nevertheless…)

As soon as I finished her, I knew I had created a masterpiece.

She was perfect. From her long, softly braided hair to the tips of her rounded toes, she was wonderfully proportioned and lovely to behold.

Years of inhaling marble dust and whittling away until my fingers ached and here she was – the best that I could have hoped for. Better, even.

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Graveyard Gazing

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(The prompt was “tradition” this time around).

 

It was that time of year again.

The time to drag all the members of the household to the local graveyard and stare at the sky.

Andrin hated this tradition.

For one thing, it was freakin’ cold.

For another, it was a freakin’ graveyard.

And for the last, freakin’ Alina always hogged the freakin’ blankets.

But there was nothing for it. November 1st had come and by golly, the parental units were committed.

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For the Love of a Sandwich

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In honor of this creepy holiday, here’s a “spooky” short story I wrote a few years ago. 🙂

The Crumptons were your average, happy family with one boy, one girl, three dogs, a ferret, and a toad named Phillipo. They lived in a charming two story house, complete with a delightful brick fireplace. The father would work, the mother would teach her children, and the animals would wreck good-natured havoc throughout the day. They lived by routine, right down to the very sandwiches they ate for lunch, which, of course, always consisted of peanut butter and jelly sandwiches.

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Riven

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The door was open.

I hesitated halfway down the staircase, looking into the yawning cavern. Mom kept the door shut because you could see right into the room.

Soft reminders echoed in my ears.

“Close the door. I don’t want to see.”

“Close the door. I don’t want the reminder.”

“Close the door….just….close the door.”

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